Friday, 15 January 2016

Music Video assignment 1 feedback


A chronological approach allows you to describe the development of the purpose of music videos from The Beatles through the 1970’s and the development of music television such as MTV.  There is reference to a range of illustrative examples some of which are detailed. You describe the context and content of music videos and discuss connotations.

There is is some discussion of contemporary music videos but further exploration of their use and purpose would allow you to show further understanding.

Clarity is sometimes affected by clumsy expression.  Re-drafting would resolve this issue. 

Punctuation could be improved with apostrophes and capital letters being employed.


Moves from 60’s discussion of The Beatles using a film to promote themselves which explains the early purpose of music video. The style of videos on Top of the Pops is described where the first section is most important as this is the part that is broadcast. When discussing MTV you could explain why the Buggles track was the first one.

Uses case studies of controversial or iconic videos and their purpose. 

Moves into M1 as the changing purpose is explained such as promoting the director and using them to make social comment or as a form of protest (MIA). Controversy raising the profile of the star.

Further discussion of contemporary videos will allow you to explain how styles and conventions have changed.  Use David Bowie.